Group Narrative
Myself and my two
group members each created our own individual narratives. We then analysed what
we had wrote and produced advantages and disadvantages for each.
My individual
narrative
My idea for a
narrative for our thriller follows a theme of revenge and jealousy. A
family, consisting of the mother, father, and two sons aged 6 and 15, move into
a new suburban house. They lead a happy and normal life until the parents begin
to hear talking from the younger sons room at night, because of this they go
into the younger sons room to see who he is talking to and are faced with the
reality that he is asleep. This shocks them. The talking at night continues but
the parents are unaware of what is actually happening behind his bedroom door.
The young boy is actually exposed to the on goings of the family who lived
there before that were murdered by the estranged father, in their sleep. They
enter the little boys bedroom every night and at first he was petrified until
they possessed him so that he was on their side because of the fact they want
the family out and their house back.The young boys family notice a difference
with the boy when he stops eating, interacting with his family members and is always
locked up in his room, so they begin to worry.
The story line
comes to the climax when the murdered family tell the young boy in his sleep
that he must murder his own family so that they can get their house back. The
boy then wakes up in the night with the mindset that he has to murder his
family and therefore progresses to their rooms. However the older brother is
awake and hears the younger boys bedroom door open, and the footsteps of him
moving towards the stairs. But he ignores it. The little boy then walks to the
kitchen to get a knife then makes his way back upstairs to his parents bedroom.
The older son then hears his footsteps again as he walks up the stairs, and
peers out his bedroom to see what his brother is doing. Then he is faced with the
sight of his little brother holding a knife progressing towards his parents
bedroom. His brother reacts fast and tries to stop him but in the process
is killed himself, the little boy then carries on into his parents room and
kills them in their sleep.
The little boy
then walks back into his bedroom and gets back in bed when he is awoken by a
policeman who has to break the news that his family have been murdered. The
little boy remembers nothing. He is then taken to an orphanage. A police
investigation is carried out which lasts 5 years until they realise it was the
young boy himself. However by the time they get to the orphanage the little boy
had killed himself as he had been depressed and hated being so alone. He also
had to live with the fact he no longer had a family, yet he did not know he was
the one who killed them.
During the
beginning of my thriller film it will be set in a suburban house. I will use
low key lighting when the little boy is in bed. I will also use a close up shot
of his face to show his expressions which portrays to the audience that he is
asleep. As well as when the little boy is in bed I will use low key lighting
when he is communicating with the murdered family to evoke the sense of mystery
and fright upon the audience, and to also distort their identities. When the
little boy begins to change his behaviour I will use dark make up around his
eyes to convey the lack of sleep he is having.
During the build
up to the climax and the actual climax of the film I will use angled shots to
show the state of power the characters have. When the child is being possessed
I will use a low angle shot to convey that the family have more power over the
little boy. Then when the little boy progresses to kill his family I will use a
another low angle shot but to show that he now has a high level of power over
his family who will become the victims. I will include iconography into my film
as the little boy will carry a knife, the knife I would use would be reasonable
big and therefore the audience will feel uncomfortable and will expect the
occurrence of death. The little boy will then kill his brother and parents so
the viewers would be presented with the sight of blood and in result their
experience will be extremely realistic.
Towards the end
of the film the setting will change to an orphanage where the little boy has
been taken. I will use high angle shots to show that he no longer has any power
and that he is now alone and vulnerable. In my film I wont allow the audience
to witness the little boy killing himself, instead I will use a high angle
zooming in shot of his body once the police reach the orphanage to surprise the
audience and shock them with will increase their suspense as to what will
happen now.
One advantage of
my individual narrative is that the narrative I have chosen is conventional to
a thriller film, and I have included generic conventions that I would employ
into it. Another advantage is that most aspects of my narrative are realistic
to include in our opening, for example, the setting of the house and being able
to obtain the different range of characters. One disadvantage of my narrative
however is that the setting I have chosen is typical to a thriller film,
however I believe it would still create an impact on the audience as from our
questionnaire we found that a house was the most popular location for a
thriller film to take place.
Danniellas'
Individual Narrative
My idea for a
narrative for our thriller is about two teenage girls who have lost a friend in
a car crash and after a year anniversary of her death and mysterious paranormal
activity happening to them they both realize she is haunting them both and
maybe blaming them for her death, the girls also see flashbacks of how she was
killed even though they weren't there to witness it. Eventually one of the
girls is possessed by their late friends spirit. During these scenes there will
be shadows and low key lighting to create a suspense atmosphere which is
conventional to a Thriller film.
Setting:
There will be
three different settings throughout the Thriller, they are an isolated school,
a deserted forest and the friends house. When the girls find out they are both
witnessing spooky paranormal activity it will be set in an isolated school
toilets. Their friend was killed in a deserted forest lane and there was
no trace of anything happening which creates mystery and shocks the audience as
to why there is no trace of a murder and if there ever was an accident? The
girls end up in their friends house where they experience some paranormal
activity which leaves the audience tense as to what is going to happen.
Beginning:
The Thriller will
begin with a flashback of the car crash in a spooky, deserted and dark forest
lane (low key lighting) which left a teenage girl dead, it will then cut to a
split scene with two other teenage girls waking up in fear as they've had a
nightmare which is the vision of their friend being killed. During this opening
scene there will be low key lighting which will create an effect of a dim,
creepy atmosphere, the non-diegetic sound of noises that come from the forest
to add a dramatic effect within the audience and also diegetic sound of heavy
breathing when the girls are having a nightmare and screams when they wake up
in shock and fear this will create a tension within the audience and also are
generic conventions towards a thriller.
Middle:
The middle of the
Thriller will consist of two different settings, the school toilets and the
forest. During the middle of the Thriller there will be a scene in the isolated
school toilets where the two girls start talking about their paranormal
experiences and tell each other about the occurring nightmare they
both keep having which is a flashback of their friends murder even though they weren't
there to witness the accident which has made them more scared. There will be
close up shots during these scenes to see the fear and shock in the girls faces
which will create suspense within the audience. They end up agreeing they
should visit the forest lane where their friend got killed which creates a
tension within the audience in itself as they're visiting the scene of a murder
which is conventional towards a Thriller as something bad would usually happen.
The girls are
in the forest trying to find the spot where their friend was killed; they
hear noises (non diegetic) and they decide to see where the noise is coming
from, this creates a suspension. The sound they hear leads them to the lane
where their friend was killed and then their friends ghost appears and says shes
been blaming them for her death and that is why shes been haunting them through
their dreams and if they don't find her killer she threatens them by showing
them she'll hurt their family, (there will be faded shots and split scenes and
close ups to show the audience the scene from the characters point of view).
End:
The end of the
Thriller the spirit of the girl possesses both of the friends which will make
the audience uncomfortable, one of the girls who was possessed then dies which
is conventional to a Thriller as there's always a murder. Meanwhile, the other
friend was left in the forest on her own and was never seen again, this will be
shown in the credits at the end.
An advantage of
Danniellas' individual narrative is the use of the female characters. This is
typical of a thriller film and therefore portrays how females are seen as the
innocent, vulnerable victims. Also the use of three different locations
provides a variation for the audience and
may frighten them as they will be led to believe paranormal happenings can
occur in these normal locations. A disadvantage of her narrative is that it
would be hard to locate and film a car crash happening. Therefore this is a
very unrealistic aspect of a thriller opening that we would of hoped to create.
Daisys'
Individual Narrative
Narrative
background
A group of 3
girls who have known each other since they were little meet after not seeing
each other for 5 years after leaving school. However, they were not always
friends. Kate and Louise sometimes played tricks on Beth which made her want to
get revenge on them. Beth was diagnosed with schizophrenia and the voices in
her head told her to torture them both then kill them and hide the evidence...
The beginning
We first see
flashbacks of Kate and Louise bullying Beth when they were small. Beth was very
sensitive and was badly effected by it. Makes us feel sympathetic towards
her. They all left school on good terms as they apologised if they had
ever upset her. We then see Beth diagnosed with schizophrenia at the
age of 18, after she had lost contact with Kate and Louise. After, (3 years
later on her 21st birthday) we see an extreme close-up of Beth's eye after
waking up in the middle of the night. We then hear the voices she is hearing in
her head, telling her she should never have forgiven the girls for the damage
they had caused. The voices say they wouldn't be there if it wasn't for Kate
and Louise. Beth decides to organise to see them both... she wants
revenge. They meet in a club that night to celebrate her birthday and
decide to go on to another after having a good time.
But then, whilst waiting for a cab Beth offers Kate and Louise the drug
Perteniam which she says would make them feel good. Beth does not take any but
pretends she does disguising another tablet for one. Kate and Louise begin to
hallucinate and as the audience we can witness how they feel with out-of-focus
camera shots (inspiration from Saw) The cab comes and Kate and Louise stumble
in, unaware that their next destination is not a club but an abandoned
house.
The middle
They arrive at
the house in an eerie forest and Beth pays the concerned driver then drags her
sleepy friends out. The cab pulls away and Beth makes sure it is gone before
blindfolding them and tying up their arms together whilst they are asleep. She
drags the attatched bodies into the house but they wake up and notice that they
are restricted. They begin to scream. Beth tells them to be quiet and
follow her instructions or she will kill them in the most painful way
possible. Beth stabs Kate several times and makes Louise watch. Sadistic
method. Beth gets pleasure from seeing Kate in physical pain and Louise
mentally distressed. Louise manages to get the knife off of Beth and
stabs her then escapes from the house whilst Beth is slowly dieng next to
Kate's dead body.
The end
Louise tries to
find her way home but the house is abandoned and in a seclusive and rural
location. No phone signal. No way of communicating to anyone for help. She
gives up hope but then a cab pulls up beside her and the man acts as if he
will help her and take her home. After Louise gets in the cab, the audience
find out that the man who claims he will help her is actually the man who took
them to the house in the first place and is in with the act with Beth! He locks
her in the boot of the cab after tying her hands and feet together so she
cannot escape. The cab driver then drives
back to the house to find Kate and Beth's corpse on the blood stained
floorboards. He panics and calls the police, forgetting that he has Louise in
his car boot! The police arrive and find no evidence that he was involved in
the murders of the girls... but then they find Louise. It ends on a
cliff-hanger with the cab driver and Louise in court. A split-screen of a
close-up of their faces. Voiceover of the court judge sentencing speech. The
audience decides what happens for themselves.
Advantages
about Daisys' individual narrative are that it is typical of the thriller
genre and has iconography that is easy to obtain. However, definite
disadvantages of her narrative is the locations would be difficult to
source, the actors would be challenging to find and particular scenes would be
hard to edit. My group have taken all of this into account and it has
made us think about how we can take aspects of each of
our individual narratives to influence our groups final narrative.
We than had a group
discussion to decide a final narrative for our thriller film opening. We chose
different aspects of each others narratives and joined them together to
create our final group narrative. From my own narrative we took the base idea
of the nightmare and the fact the character was a young child. The use of this
character is conventional to a thriller as a young child in danger feels
realistic to the audience and therefore increases their experience while
watching. Additionally, from Daisys' narrative we have used the idea of a
character taking a pill which causes drastic side effects. The use of this idea
is not a typical aspect of a thriller film and therefore we are exploring
different ideas. Lastly, from Danniellas' narrative we have used the locations
of the forest and house. This is because through our research we found that
these were the two most popular locations and therefore including them in our
opening would also enhance the viewers experience.
Our thriller film
opening will start with there being two children, a brother and sister in the
location of their home. The brother, who has schizophrenia, gives his
sister an unknown pill to take before they go to bed. This portrays the
convention of a vulnerable, young girl being the victim and therefore creates
suspense upon the audience. A split screen shot of the brother and sister
asleep in their separate beds, in separate rooms, from a high angle, is then
employed. The two shots will then zoom in, in sync, to their eyes. A
dissolving shot will then be used on both characters to show how the audience
are being taken into their dreams. The dissolving shot will be of their eyes
and the nightmare together, and the audience are presented with the fact both
characters are experiencing the same nightmare.
The nightmare
will be set in a forest where the young girl is being chased by her brother,
but at the start she is unaware it is him as he is wearing a mask. Low key
lighting will be employed here and the use of diegetic sound, when the audience
hear the crunching of their footsteps as they run through the forest across the
leaves, and the screams of the young girl. We also will use fast-paced
editing and a number of straight cuts to provide the audience with a chaotic
atmosphere. As well as this we will incorporate a handheld shot to
convey to the audience the young girls point of view when running through the
forest, and therefore the audience will feel frightened as the event feels
extremely realistic to them. The brother, who is wearing a mask, manages to
catch up with the sister and the audience are provided with a close up shot of
the knife he is carrying. He then restrains his sister and repeatedly attempts
to stab her but she constantly tries to pull herself away. In result her
brother ends up stabbing her in the cheek. At this point of the nightmare we
will flash back to a split screen of the children in bed, showing their
reaction during the event.
Once the audience
are returned to the nightmare they are shown a high angle shot of the young
girl lying on the floor covered in blood with her brother standing over her. We
will then employ a point of view shot of the girl which will be out of
focus as she drops in and out of consciousness. The brother believes she
is dead and therefore removes his mask, however she manages to make out his
identity and at this point they both awake from their dream. The young girl
immediately looks in the mirror and still witnesses the horrific gash on her
face, and therefore this causes her to throw up. She then looks back again but
this time it is gone. The nightmare impacts on both children as she is scared
for her life, and because the brother is schizophrenic, he panics and easily becomes
possessed by the nightmare he experienced. Because of this, we will add dark
make-up around the boys eyes to portray how he is not himself and
therefore the audience will suspect this, which in result will raise their
suspense and anticipation levels.
An
advantage of our group narrative is the use of different camera shots and
generic conventions which are conventional to the thriller genre. Also the use
of the female victim and how we incorporated out questionnaire results into
choosing our location. A disadvantage of our narrative however, is that we have
not explored any new ideas and have not broke any conventions to make our
thriller opening unique.